Section review
Comment by section.
Use the bill section, proposed change, reason, source, and risk-reduction format.
FOCaF family resource
RFC reviewer toolkit
Reviewers should be able to comment on the draft without becoming part of a private case intake pipeline.
Hard questions
Flag blockers early.
Due process, abuse safety, implementation cost, enforcement, drafting authority, and constitutional concerns should surface before filing.
Plain-language review
Voters need understandable summaries.
Feedback on voter-summary clarity is as important as technical legal feedback.
No confidential facts
Keep the record clean.
Do not submit confidential records, children’s names, private allegations, or sealed court material.